This is a PhD proposal. i need it to be reduced to 3 pages and add some changes.
you can find bellow the Doctor’s comments on the proposal, please flow the instructions as well as the instructions on the link below.

(please put in a few objectives of study( in point form), review of basic literature( mention some authors and their work) and some theory/ies which you might find useful e.g. sustainability, development etc.
You need to reorganize the material according to the guidelines provided on our website )